Thursday, September 27, 2012

Seed Packet Project: Second Class Critique & Progress


The results of my full-critique.  Most comments were positive about my changes & the design overall.  Some areas for improvement included spreading the faded effect more across the piece, reconsidering the font for "Ol' Dusty's," and rewording my marketing slogans at the bottom.




I've made sure to spread the faded effect more across the packet.  As well, I experimented with a more characteristic type face for Old Dusty's "branding." Lastly, I made sure the slogan at the bottom was less aggressive & more informational.



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