Seed Packet Project: First Critique

Today was our first critique for our first seed packet fronts.

Here is my draft of my seed packet (on sandstone resume paper) with notes from the critique.  Changes I plan on making include enlarging the label circle area, flipping the "Donald's" for readability, adding some sort of detail to the green banner that runs across the top, adding some sort of banner to the bottom for balance & as a place for advertising/text, and lastly adding some more grungy & worn texture or treatment.