Critiques took place Thursday. After the critique, we were given the opportunity to make changes to better our design. One comment that was prominent in the critique of my piece was that there were too many elements vying for attention. In my re-design, I took out the chalk drawing a the glass of orange juice and replaced it with a less intrusive red glow with lightning bolts & rays. Lesser elements like articles & the top bar were moved slightly, as well as the masthead slightly tweaked for better alignment.
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